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    02 June

    清晨接力

        我为广告做广告

        点击观看  (左下角有播放键)

        这是日本雀巢公司拍的,用了谷村俊太郎的一首短诗。所有的画面都是清晨的天空,耳边响起的是清澈的钢琴声。最后的广告词是:早上好,雀巢咖啡。   

        试着翻了一下,做个参考吧。   

       清晨的接力

                               by 谷川俊太郎

    堪察加半岛的青年  正梦见长颈鹿的时候

    芝加哥的女孩  在清晨的雾霭中等着公车

    纽约的少女  在床上翻了个身继续她甜甜的梦

    罗马的少年  睡眼惺忪地望着刚爬上墙头的阳光

    这个星球  无论何时  总有某个角落在清晨中张开眼睛

     

    我们就这样接力着清晨

    从一个经度交给下一个经度

    轮流守卫我们的星球

    熄灭最后一盏灯前  只要你细心聆听

    就能听到远方传来闹钟的铃声

    那铃声是在告诉你

    我已经紧紧抓住被你送走的清晨

           此广告有个有声版屏保,去年我还常用来着。如果喜欢,可以到这里或者这里下载。

    附:诗歌原文

    朝のリレー 

    カムチャツカの若者が  きりんの夢を見ているとき
    メキシコの娘は    朝もやの中でバスを待っている
    ニューヨークの少女が  ほほえみながら寝がえりをうつとき
    ローマの少年は     柱頭を染める朝陽にウインクする
    この地球では     いつもどこかで朝がはじまっている

    ぼくらは朝をリレーするのだ
    経度から経度へと
    そうしていわば交替で地球を守る
    眠る前のひととき耳をすますと
    どこか遠くで目覚時計のベルが鳴ってる
    それはあなたの送った朝を
    誰かがしっかりと受けとめた証拠なのだ

    Comments (7)

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    maggie_maya wrote:
    素敵!岩井俊二の映画みたい~
    8 June
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    札幌★ wrote:
    我是看到你SPACE的题目进来的
    因为我也超喜欢MARIO^_^
    6 June
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    叶子·G wrote:
    加了个图图,更漂亮了。ym总是把帖子弄得很漂亮的说。
    6 June
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    minami_hjl wrote:
    翻得很好啊!建议拿去给高老师show一下,一定会被表扬的。
    3 June
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    socialclub1982 wrote:
    刚看过,很清新的感觉,虽然听不懂: )

    MI妹妹最近真的很勤奋的说!!!!!!!
    2 June
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    叶子·G wrote:
    想起了我的blog里面的留言:我在上海夏未至的时候,CH在挪威仍在开着暖气,而yan在德国感受30好几的温度,原来地球上面四季也在接力?
    2 June
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    叶子·G wrote:
    早上好!mi mm大早上更新blog,很有清新的感觉。大概昨天睡好了?
    上班呢,广告先不能看。很喜欢这首诗的意境,尤其是前半段的那些地名,把这些地名放在一起,本身就很浪漫。我喜欢!
    2 June

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